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Tic-tac
the hands of the clock do
Tic-tac
and the bells toll
Tic-tac
and the wind knocks on your window.

Tic-tac
the cricket sings
Tic-tac
you look at the ceiling, lost
Tic-tac
something has moved.

Tic-tac
you tangle on your sheet
Tic-tac
you hide under your pillow
Tic-tac
the dawn barely begins.

Tic-tac
you take it on your hands
Tic-tac
the hands of the clock keep their song
Tic-tac
against the wall.

Tic-tac, your head still sings on its own.


Aldana Tellechea © 2006
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Author's Comments

Personally, I hate the "tic-tac" of the clock when I want to fall asleep.

Hope you like it :aww:. Thanks for reading! ;).

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:iconezaren:
Ahh, I hate the tic-tac too.. >_<
But I don't hate this tic-tac verse. I actually like it. :)

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"Tic-tac, your head still sings on its own" simplemente perfecto... *me is speechless*
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woow!! me encanto!! me encanto como desarrollaste ese molesto detalle que tanto t molesta, me gusto mucho!!! =D
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Very nice piece, cookie.I like it!:hug:

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:glomp: Next great poem :)

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I love the repetition and when I read it, I couldn't help but hear that tic-tac noise. (Not too fond of it while I'm trying to sleep though! >.< ) I especially like the last verse, I'm not sure why, but I just do. :D

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